Your dialogue is good and builds a nice sense of character up. Because of your dyslexia I'd like you to go through your work with a member of the learning support team before you upload it. Are you currently having any weekly meetings with anyone? The dialogue is at merit level at present, but does need proofreading.
Your dialogue is good and builds a nice sense of character up. Because of your dyslexia I'd like you to go through your work with a member of the learning support team before you upload it. Are you currently having any weekly meetings with anyone? The dialogue is at merit level at present, but does need proofreading.
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